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This topic contains 1 reply, has 2 voices, and was last updated by Brenda McGraw 10 years, 10 months ago.
Susan,
I thought this was great. You had me right there with you. I resonated with everything in the car you did except the word for friends – lol.
You had me wondering where you were and what you were doing.
I did see one type – introduction was spelled wrong.
Great job.
Brenda
(Do you mind looking at my story? I haven’t gotten any comments yet. It’s called Up, UP and Away.
Thanks.
Brenda
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