Up Jacob's Ladder

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This topic contains 2 replies, has 2 voices, and was last updated by  Susan Carnes 10 years, 9 months ago.

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  • July 1, 2014 at 7:19 pm #4411

    Ruthanne Reid
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    This. Is. BEAUTIFUL.

    The poetry is gorgeous as it is, and then lines like This state of the art dairy barn designed by Wisconsin architects was a model for the dairy state just make it even more delightful. WOW. I’m in love with the mood and pacing and phrasing. I can’t honestly think of anything to critique at the moment! I just enjoyed it so much as a reader that it took me out of myself (which is what good writing is supposed to do).

  • July 3, 2014 at 10:27 am #4439

    Susan Carnes
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    Ruthanne:
    This is a chapter from my book The Way Back, and it is a mostly true story for I grew up with this barn and this man (and I still have the badge). I hoped the story was self contained enough for this exercise. It is hard to find time to write a new story for I am blogging all the time now at http://www.susancarnes.wordpress.com . I thank you for the Follow. When you post your story, I will read and comment of course. Also, your idea of magic really resonates with me. I looked at your profile after the “Follow”.

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