LoriMarie

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  • in reply to: Cartelista Chat – 6/11/14 #4492

    LoriMarie
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    I would love another chat. I’ve been focusing on creating a blog and I feel I’ve lost touch with you all a bit.

  • in reply to: Anybody Need Some Website Help? :) #4491

    LoriMarie
    Participant

    Oh how I wish I had seen this generous offer before I began constructing my blog a couple of weeks ago. I ended up buying the Moka theme which is very nice. My problem was/is I knew/know absolutely nothing. My blog is as simple as can be and not exactly as I wanted because of it. I think you’re fabulous for offering your help and I would have gladly taken it.

  • in reply to: Need a Book Cover? I Can Help … #4490

    LoriMarie
    Participant

    Angie! You’re so talented. The covers are striking, individualized and would tempt me into buying the book. If I had a finished work I would snap up your offer right quick.

  • in reply to: Collaboration Idea – What Are Your Thoughts? #4488

    LoriMarie
    Participant

    Hi, I’m not sure if the project is still open to writers. I would love to be a part of it. I got a bit backlogged with rule one assignment 3- I had to build a blog from scratch in order to publish and I didn’t have any idea how to do that but i got a wordpress, bought a theme and made a basic blog. Here is the blog site for an example of my writing style.

    lorimarieblair.co

    If it is too late, I completely understand and look forward to the read. You are all wonderful writers and this project will be wonderful.

  • in reply to: What one writer can do for another. #4487

    LoriMarie
    Participant

    Lee, You’re a blessing. I’m honored to be given the chance to get to know you and I appreciate every word you write. Thank you for sharing your truth as it reminds me of mine. xoxo

  • in reply to: Snakes! A Story in Three Parts #3908

    LoriMarie
    Participant

    These are very good. They contain soul and I adore your reasons for writing them down.

  • in reply to: The Capture #3907

    LoriMarie
    Participant

    Beautifully told, you honour the story into legend.

    PS. On a personal note, I’m dealing with my own insecurities and fears and so a comfort to read.

  • in reply to: Hello Cartelistas #3904

    LoriMarie
    Participant

    Hello Juanita– that’s wonderful.

  • in reply to: Hi Everyone (Stuart Williams) #3903

    LoriMarie
    Participant

    Hi Stuart, I worked as a reporter photographer for almost 7 years and found it very difficult to write fiction. I had to get out. I think you’ll find your fiction writing will flourish. I do think working to deadlines gave me a great deal of discipline. I tried to friend you on facebook but it didn’t work. If you want to friend me go to my intro and there is a link.

  • in reply to: Hi from a husband and wife team #3901

    LoriMarie
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    Hello to the both of you! ooooh I love those deliciously wrong type of characters. Looking forward to reading your work.

  • in reply to: Tiptoeing in, hoping not to be noticed #3900

    LoriMarie
    Participant

    Hi jyl! I’m in Ontario too 🙂 I’m sure your words will come.

  • in reply to: Last Day! #3899

    LoriMarie
    Participant

    My daughter and I have been LOVING it. Oh my gosh, the scene with Whiskers and the jet pack had us laughing out loud.

  • in reply to: Author Interview Assignment #3898

    LoriMarie
    Participant

    What a missed opportunity for the writer. I’d love to read some of your marketing tips.

  • in reply to: The Ten Second Rule #3906

    LoriMarie
    Participant

    Great Story! I agree with what you wrote in your intro about meaningful moments happening in small amounts of time. Some of my favourite stories are by Alice Munro, the queen of little moments. This was very well done. Each swing was dramatic with tension. Because of the little details you included, the slowing down of the ten second count, the $5.00 handout, I got a real feel of the group of friends who know and love each-other. Waughs punchline was the perfect ending. The only thing I might suggest is in the opening paragraph, instead of telling us you felt pressure, show us you feeling pressure.

  • in reply to: Hey, I'm Sunny — Returning Cartelista :-) #3905

    LoriMarie
    Participant

    Hey Sunny, I don’t really know enough to ask an appropriate question. I would be interested in maybe a top ten list. Something like 10 Things I’ve Learned About Publishing.

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