I also have my book up on Story Cartel (“Daniel the Draw-er”, Children’s/MG fiction). Even though I’m a slow reader due to life, I’ll check yours out and [eventually] get a review up on Amazon.
I write the way I write, so I don’t have plans to change unless everything just falls to pieces. 🙂 But I love to hear what others think about elements like this.
I agree that I don’t expect to read a third-person POV in present tense. And Gone Girl is a really good example, thanks for reminding me of that (we will not talk about the ending, though! I’m still mad! 😉 )
Thanks, Lori! I’m glad you liked it. These stories don’t always come easily because it takes me a while to morph into a 9/10-year-old boy, but they’re so much fun to re-read. 🙂
